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To do Nothing

 

A Villanelle entry #PenMuse-51

 

To do nothing, how often, I have tried,

But my inquisitive mind won’t sit tight.

Jumpy, like a chipmunk, if it’d only abide.

 

Thoughts play havoc, hours of meditation glide.

My mind cooks up stories, it soars on fancy’s flight!

To do nothing, how often, I have tried.

 

Some sorcery’s up its sleeve, I’m left tongue-tied;

It floats on currents of memories, a stray kite,

Jumpy, like a chipmunk, if it’d only abide.

 

Minutes trickle, precious days ebb and slide

Into weeks: to tame its wildness, I’ve no insight.

To do nothing, how often, I have tried.

 

I’ve cussed and yelled, many times, I’ve tried it to chide.

It won’t listen, how I wish, I could set it right.

Jumpy, like a chipmunk, if it’d only abide.

 

A truant child, it flees gleefully, I’m petrified.

Alas, Time’s wasted on my mind’s futile fight!

To do nothing, how often, I have tried,

Jumpy, like a chipmunk, if it’d only abide.

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Mumtaz Khorakiwala

 

19-4-2023

 

Villanelle ( rustic/ peasant song)

Form

A Villanelle consists of 19 lines: a fixed standard form – five tercets & a quatrain. The first and third lines  of the first verse act as a refrain. They recur, alternately, and are a part of the last quatrain.

Dylan Thomas  and Elizabeth Bishop’s villanelles  won this French pastoral verse form popularity. A number of English poets including Oscar Wilde , WE Henley & WH Auden have experimented with this form. Auden’s  If I Could tell You,is a another noteworthy example.

Here are some links you could visit:

 

https://www.poetryfoundation.org/poetrymagazine/poems/55798/september-2011

 

 

https://www.poetryfoundation.org/poetrymagazine/poems/89008/my-darling-turns-to-poetry-at-night

 

The Best Villanelles in English Poetry

 

 

Reference:

 

1. J. A. Cuddon: Dictionary of Literary Terms & Literary Theory: Penguin References, 1999. London

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